Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
:iconcblair:

Artist's Comments

"Why don't you say so?
I think I'm caught in between
The nights and days fly by
When I'm lost on the streets
And my eyes, they despise you for who I am
Why don't you say so?
Why don't you say so?
Give up and let go
I'm just a boy with a dream
And you can take one look
As I fall in between
With my eyes just as wide as my mouth can be
Why don't you say so?
Why don't you say so?

I know, I know, I know
That there's a place for me somewhere out there
I know, I know, I know
That there's a place for me somewhere out there..."

from Poppin' Champagne

Alex Gaskarth singer and guiatrist, All Time Low
charcoal drawing 4 hours
this photo reference is from the underwear shoot, wish I could draw them on his head :lol: here's the pic: [link]
best viewed full size

Critiques


:iconherr-grinch:
This one is really a no brainer. At first glace I'm greeted with penetrating eyes. After I get over the eyes, I look at the drawing as a whole. The hair is immaculately placed and the highlights and shadows in the face give it a soft and tranquil focus.

Vision:
This category doesn't really apply to your work; it's a portrait. This it does a fine job at.

Originality:
Portraits have been done before, and what I'm guessing is charcoal on a midtone paper isn't exactly a new technique... but this isn't necessarily a bad thing.

Technique:
This is the category in which your piece shines. Both the composition, pose, shading, and contrast are phenomenal. It looks like it could use a little more detail, but I believe it would lose some of its charm if it were.

Impact:
Like I said before, the eyes grab my attention instantly. The pose (while probably referenced from a publicity photo) looks as if someone had just tapped him on the shoulder. The soft focus from the smudging also adds to its memorability.

All in all. A great piece. Definitely something you should be proud of. :D
The Artist thought this was FAIR
33 out of 33 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 5 5 joy 4 4 wow 3 3 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconmacabreaustererandom:
I must fave this. It's amazing.

--
"How did I become so obnoxious?
What is it with you that makes me act like this?"
-P!NK

So appropriate for me...

Is it just me or did Flo Rida COMPLETELY steal the hook for "Sugar" from Eiffel 65?! They da ba dee da ba die'd first!
:iconsugablossom4:
This is amazing! Seriously, I adore your drawings. They are so life like. I remember seeing one of them for the first time and thinking it was a black and white photo. A+ for you.

--
~MetroStationclub: Don't let the name fool you, we're not only for Metro Station.
The Maine = :heart:
I am Garrett Nickelsen in dA's Celebrities Crew!
:iconnatalierae2k8:
Beautifully done! His smile reminds me of the Mona Lisa.
:iconcblair:
Thanks so much!! :hug:

--
Man’s evolution consists in the process of changing to forms that are not of this world. Grows he in time to the formless — to live on a higher plane. Know that you must become formless before you can be one with the Light.
- Emerald Tablets of Thoth
:iconcblair:
why thank you!

--
Man’s evolution consists in the process of changing to forms that are not of this world. Grows he in time to the formless — to live on a higher plane. Know that you must become formless before you can be one with the Light.
- Emerald Tablets of Thoth
:iconcblair:
true enough! :)

--
Man’s evolution consists in the process of changing to forms that are not of this world. Grows he in time to the formless — to live on a higher plane. Know that you must become formless before you can be one with the Light.
- Emerald Tablets of Thoth
:iconalovelymeinside:
Awesome band, gorgeous guy, dare I say even more gorgeous drawing? Yep.

--
~There is life before death...but sometimes you're dead before you die.~
:iconresolution-db:
i like the eye and the eye lid their shading grading is wonderful and so expressive ... well done :)
:iconm-i-r-i-e-l:
The things you can do with charcoal - amazing! :clap:

--
I was born to catch dragons in their dens,
And pick flowers.
To tell tales and laugh away the morning.
To drift and dream like a lazy stream,
And walk barefoot across sunshine days.
~ James Kavanaugh
:icontearyoursoulapart:
AMAZING as usual!

--
Northern Downpour Sends Its Love On A Bad Bet

Check out my fanfics
~fallout-panic-girl
Join some clubs
=PortraitPencilArt
*dAportraiteures
*TheGraphiteClub
~Sit-Back-Relax

Details

April 22
691 KB
103 KB
600×814

Statistics

233
409 [who?]
5,604 (18 today)
0 (0 today)

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map